The Writing is in the STAAR

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“Failing STAAR: Tests a struggle” – Austin American Statesman July 6, 2013

“STAAR Results: Students still struggle on writing tests” – Austin American Statesman June 11, 2013

The headlines keep coming, but the story remains the same.  Across the state of Texas, almost half the students are not passing the writing test in the latest round of standardized exams. Only 54 percent of students passed the English 1 test geared toward high school freshmen this past spring. To say it differently, 152,000 students failed it. It’s the test “that students struggle with the most” according to the Statesman. In fact, only 14 percent of those retaking the writing portion passed – and some of them were taking it for the fourth time!

The state legislature cut the number of required tests for graduation from 15 to 5 in the latest session and I am going to sidestep the whole issue of whether we are testing enough or too much. The issue here is whether our students can write and the evidence is not optimistic. “However, statewide, the biggest challenge seems to be in writing, and English I and English II are still graduation requirements,” said Bill Caritj, chief performance officer at Austin Independent School District in the July 6 story.

This makes our heads explode at Cicero’s Academy™.

You know the popular criticism of the education system? That they only teach what’s on the test? Apparently, writing is the proverbial exception that proves the rule. The June 11 newspaper story quotes interested parties, consultants and other experts who claim that writing is tested but never taught in anything other than “drive-by writing instruction,” according to the head of the Texas Council of Teachers of English Language Arts.

In fairness, these results on writing proficiency are not unique to the great state of Texas. Florida caused an uproar last year when it raised the writing standard for grammar and syntax on its mandated test. Similar stories have played out elsewhere. The 2011 nation’s report card on writing showed that 54 percent of 12th grade students have only a partial mastery of what’s expected of them at that grade level. We see the results of this situation in the college classroom. At Cicero’s Academy, we have trained middle schoolers to write better than some college undergraduates. John sees these students in his college classroom and there is only so much that can be done in a semester at that level. The problem, though, includes graduate students who simply cannot pass their classes without writing coherent arguments that do more than just regurgitate the material covered in class. Writing and critical thinking go hand in hand.

This is not news to the future employers of our young people. The 2004 National Writing Assessment found that American businesses in just the finance and real estate industries were spending more than $3 billion a year on remedial writing instruction. They are not spending that money because they worry that the semi-colon is under-appreciated. It is money that – while not wasted – is going to build skills in the workforce that should come with a diploma. They are taking money that could go toward hiring more people or innovating new products and services to correct a problem that should not exist.

The flip side of this is worth considering, too. If half the workforce is composed of poor communicators, the other half stands out. Good communication skills are considered signs that employees should be considered for advancement. Hot young fast trackers are expected to present to executive staff and argue the value of their ideas or they will no longer be on the fast track.

Our high-tech, connected world is not obsoleting good communication skills. Google is the very definition of a 21st century company that is all about digital technology. Its name is a mathematical construct for goodness sake! It once ran an engineering recruitment campaign in Silicon Valley that involved billboards with nothing more than a mathematical equation on them. If you knew the answer to the equation, you found them and they knew they wanted you. So, what makes someone successful at Google? The company launched a human resources project called “Oxygen” to find out.

If you guessed math and science or technical engineering skills, you might be surprised. The answer was…communication skills as they applied in different ways. Technical field-related knowledge ranked dead last. Building on that project, Google now has a large database of information they use to evaluate people including how they communicate in everyday e-mail and verbal interactions.

This is why Cicero’s Academy exists. STEM education will take care of itself. But, we are failing the future when it comes to teaching our students how to communicate, argue their positions and motivate others to action. What’s worse, we are deluding ourselves that it is somehow less important than other hard skills or that effective communication is all a matter of opinion.

By no means do we claim that teaching kids to write well or speak well is easy. It requires love, patience, a sense of fun and wonder about the power of words along with a systematic approach that can teach a repeatable skill. It requires that the student be engaged enough to keep writing and that the teacher can give feedback that is specific, encouraging and practical.

So, we hope to see you in the coming weeks at our intermediate writing, public speaking and SAT workshops. We will work with you on tutoring schedules if those times do not meet your needs. We will give you a quick evaluation of your student’s work through the Essay Doctor service if that’s all you need.

We will keep plugging away. It’s the only way to keep our heads from exploding.

…And Communication

Pink Gerbera DaisiesThe word “and” appears to be fading from the English language, like Michael J. Fox faded from the picture of the McFly family in “Back to the Future.”

SPOILER ALERT!

It took a heroic moment from daddy McFly to bring Michael J. back into the picture and we might need a similar effort to rejuvenate our ability to conceive of two things on an equal footing at the same time.

See what I did there? You probably read right past it. The word “and” connects two segments of the above sentence. Both segments are necessary to understand my point. Even though one of them has to come first, the second segment is just as important.

I got on this hunt for the “and” after reading a piece by business guru Geoffrey Moore about the slavish and exclusive (Look, there it is again!) devotion we have to STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Math) education. To be clear, he was not advocating against STEM education and neither am I. Moore and I agree that STEM education is a vital part of our nation’s future. Bring on the robotics competitions and the baking soda volcanoes.

The troubling thing, though, is that “and” is missing from this equation.

Moore used the writerly strategy of a flower metaphor to illustrate his point. The stem is a vital part of the plant. Without the stem, the plant is not a flower as we understand what it means for something to be a rose or a daffodil or a carnation. The stem is only one vital part of our understanding of flowers. The stem supports a complex of petals, pistils and stamens that work with the stem to create what we define to be a flower. To intellectually reduce the flower to any one of those structures is to destroy what we all mean by the word “flower.” To act on that reduction in the physical world is to rip up a flower.

Try giving Mom a handful of stems – no pistils, petals or stamens – on Mother’s Day and this richer understanding of flowers will become abundantly clear.

So by all means, let’s teach these budding inventors and designers to invent and design – AND – how to sell their ideas to investors – AND – how to inspire others to follow them in their passions. STEM without communication skills is a flower…without the power.

Summer Sequels and Cicero

Movie PopcornSummer blockbusters are upon us. “Iron Man 3” boasts more suits than a Nordstrom’s Rack sale. “Star Trek Into Darkness” finds Capt. Kirk wondering why Sherlock Holmes is attacking the Enterprise. The “Man of Steel” seeks acceptance in a complex world where both his fathers played Robin Hood.

And Cicero’s Academy™ is back with a series of workshops and a new ongoing service.

We truly appreciate your patience and continuing engagement. Long story short, Cicero’s Academy™ kept a low profile in recent months while John finished a draft of his dissertation. The draft is done, edits are underway and summer is approaching.

Thank you for your patience. We will now continue with our regular programming.

We’re excited about the summer workshops and look forward to seeing you and your students there. June’s public speaking workshop was designed on the heels of the professional speaking class John led at St. Edwards University this spring. The intermediate workshop in July reprises a workshop from last summer. The August workshop is geared toward preparing high school students for the time-constrained writing efforts required in advanced placement and SAT testing, as well as the art and science of the college application’s personal essay.

We are also experimenting with new ways to stay connected beyond hands-on workshops and tutoring as well as support you in your everyday schooling efforts. This summer we are launching the Essay Doctor service. This is how it works:

You, or your child’s teacher, assign your student an essay project in the normal course of schooling. The subject might be history, science, literature or whatever. If you want an outside perspective on the writing quality of the essay, send it to us and we will evaluate it with specific comments, similar to the portfolio evaluation we do at the end of our Introduction to Persuasion workshop. You might just want a second opinion or to augment another curriculum.  The teacher remains in control of the assignment. We simply provide an extra set of eyes on the quality of the writing and help identify areas of improvement for follow-up assignments.

Responding to your suggestions, we’re also trying to streamline the pesky administrative part of Cicero’s Academy™ by adding payment by PayPal for your convenience. We’ll be upgrading the site further, adding sections with content of interest from around the web.

It’s summer in Austin and things are heating up.

This is My Box

We have noted calls on the Austin home school list serv for help with teaching students to write good paragraphs. One home schooling mother hoped for online help. Our long-term goal is to offer tools and sessions on this website. Unfortunately, we do not have the capability yet. Starting up Cicero’s Academy requires juggling a lot of moving parts and we have not mastered the art and science of turning our methods into online tools. So, to help out those parents in need, we are preparing to roll out our next workshop— Elementary Paragraph Writing – “This is My Box” — at the end of November.  We are still working out the logistics for the workshop and will post the details soon. In the meantime, we thought we would share a few “pearls of wisdom” related to writing good paragraphs.

Elsewhere on this website, we talk about our building block approach. Good paragraph construction is one of the most important building blocks we teach our young writers at Cicero’s Academy. The paragraph is the basis of essays and eventually research papers. If a student understands how a paragraph is structured – and why it is structured that way – the transition to writing essays is smoother. The ability to think in paragraphs is also a stepping stone to good public speaking. Like a brick in a sturdy wall, the paragraph is an important building block of a lifetime of communication.

We recognize that the end of November is still a month away from this writing and the online discussion is happening now. So, here is a sneak peek.

We sub-title the workshop “This is My Box” for two basic reasons:

  • We like that song from the old “Amahl and the Night Visitors” movie; and
  • Because we use a box to teach paragraph structure.

Hopefully, that sounds intriguing rather than crazy. Bear with us either way.

The box serves double duty in teaching elementary students about paragraphs. It provides a very physical tool that elementary students can literally get their arms around. A box has a top and a bottom and it is filled with things that are in that box for a reason. We take students through exercises in which they write about several physical boxes and their contents. Secondly, this idea of top, bottom and details provides a metaphor for structuring paragraphs from other material. For instance, students apply the metaphor in ways such as explaining pictures and summarizing a fable. The box provides a simple, everyday construct for young writers to use to shape their thoughts.

It’s fun and we’ve used this approach in both group and tutoring situations. Please check back again for details on Elementary Paragraph Writing – “This is My Box”  and feel free to use the idea in the meantime.

Welcome to Cicero’s Forum

Cicero told his students to practice their communication skills in the Roman Forum. The forum was a rectangular area in the city center that provided Rome’s public sphere for debate. Cicero admonished his apprentices that to be persuasive in the forum required skill, knowledge of weighty matters and the ability to think on your feet.

Today, the forum stands in ruins. The Internet is the closest 21st century analogue. So, welcome to the forum at Cicero’s Academy™.

Cicero’s Academy™ is about workshops, curricula, our innovative Writing Slams and other event-driven forms of education. This website is also part of the package for those who register. Cicero’s Forum™ is our primary blog and it will be updated regularly with topics on education, communication and things that strike our fancy. We will also invite Crassus, Cicero’s alter ego from his own writings on communication, to weigh in from time to time.

The website will evolve and we welcome your input on content you would like to see. Some of our own ideas include an “Assign This” section for home school writing assignments, recommended books, a collection of our own tools and curricula and eventually a password-protected “Ask Cicero” forum where we can share ideas about writing from all those registered at the site.

Membership in Cicero’s Academy™ will have its privileges.